I liked it!
Good worm motion, but try to put the worm on the ground and maybe a slight pause when it moves. so the head moves the tail catches up and the head moves again.
I think if you bend his knees a little it will give more emphasis on that the doll is him. Also, although the girl ( I assume it's a girl) on the left isn't talking you should have her look at the person talking then down at the doll when he has her where she was touched.
The animation in the begining was a little choppy but the story was hilarious.
I thought i was going to hate this. But the animation was better then I expected. Keep practicing!
Thanks! I will!
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